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Surrender

Surrender

My blood has blossomed iron
I wear a meteor's trail. I breathe filaments
of copper, my nails chip my flaking skin, lost
in a corrupted breath when I touched
my tongue to a word, abandoned
organic weightlessness. Now the ground furrows
with my step. I will build myself a home
among the weathered stones. Blind myself
with particles of mortar, cessate
through transmutation, forget
to walk without compression.

So, long explanation ahead..lol I am doing as promised to caffienekitty  and leaving an upcoming fic (which she gave me the plot bunny for) unlocked. I am hoping she might agree to beta it too;) I figured in for a penny in for a pound, and I'm leaving this unlocked too. For better or for worse. *facepalm*

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caffienekitty
Nov. 4th, 2010 08:16 pm (UTC)
Hooray! :-D

Of course I'm willing to beta, although I know nothing about the crossover 'verse. :-)
ciaranbochna
Nov. 5th, 2010 12:41 am (UTC)
I don't think it is necessary, although I am completely paranoid about Sherlock's characterization--and I have only written one part. Is is slightly disturbing that I am not so worried about the Cenobite? lol
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